Long time no see
My recent TOEFL score is 92. Hahaha.
It is on line schedule.
I feel confortable for that result. Of course, I need over 105, but I can know my English skill is growing and might be catch up with the goal.
My recent mistakes.
1:"unemployment insurance"->"unemployment benefits"
2: avoid repetition
3: If I use, " This is because it makes me very happy" means I am already running my own business.
If I want to imply that I am not yet in business, I have to say "This is because I believe it Would make me very happy."