TOEFL 勉強 day6
土曜ということで朝寝坊。
現在10:50。11:00～開始しよう。
実施していなかったRANK１の英単語を再チェック。７７３－１０９８までOK。
よし英作文に行きましょう。
本日は13：00よりBerlitzにて英会話レッスン。
Writingタスクを添削してもらえるので、チェック用の英文を作成する必要あり。
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Even though there may be some thoughts that the best age of marriage is under 30 years old, I think that over 30 years old is the best age to marry. The first reason is that people who are 30 years old have stable income and the second reason is that their mental are independent. I shall now explain that in more details
To begin with, people over 30 years old have greater financial strength than people under 30 years old. I think 30 years old people have long time working experience and they get accustomed to working. They have power of youth and experience of working. They can get higher salary and their income are more stable. Marriage needs a lot of money in order to buy cars, build a house and grow their children. For example, my coworker have a long-term loan to build a house. He also has to support three children. He has to earn much more money. If I want to marry, I have to have stable financial plan. Young people need stable job.
Next, I think 30 year people are independent and their mental is under control. In contrast, people who are under 30 years are annoyed by their future and luck their confidence. Growing their children needs patience. Children are annoying and harming their parent. For example, a small child always yells at midnight and his or her mother have to give milk by interrupting her sleep. It is necessary for them to be more patience to support their children.
All in all, I believe that over 30 years old is the best age to marry. They can live without their parent’s support and their mental are mature to grow their children.
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Even though there may be many different thoughts about the best age of marriage is under thirty years old. I think that over thirty years old is the best age to marry. This is because of three reasons. Since people over thirty have a stable income, are independent and mature. I think that people should marry after thirty.
To begin with, people over thirty years old have greater financial strength than people under thirty years old. I think thirty year olds people have a lot of working experience. They are not only young, but they are also experienced workers. They can have higher salary and their income is more stable. Marriage needs a lot of money for a variety of reasons, for instance, to buy cars, build a house and grow their children. For example, my coworker has a long-term loan for a house. He also has to support three children. He has to earn much more money than before. If I want to get married, I have to have a stable financial plan. Threfore, young people need stable job.
In addition, I think thirty year people are independent and mature. In contrast, people who are under thirty years old are annoyed by their future and lack confidence. Raising their children requires patience. Children are annoying and challenging for their parent. For example, a small child always yells at midnight and his or her mother has to give milk, interrupting his or her sleep. It is necessary for them to be more patient to support their children.
All in all, I believe that over thirty years old is the best age to marry. They can live without their parents’ support and they are mature enough to raise their children.
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