TOEFL Writing 添削サービス
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英語de日記 10500円/1500語(7円/語） https://www.eigo-nikki.com/
IDIY 8.9円/語？13.4円/語？ https://idiy.biz/
大人の英語添削の進め 2円/語? https://otonanoeigo.com/
MAINICHITENSAKU 12円/語 https://www.mainichitensaku.jp/%E6%96%99%E9%87%91/
I register 英語de日記 service and do free trial. I check today's VOA news and pick up Negrian News which show that Negrian sugger farmer suffer from economic poor-demand for suger. They can not sell sugar for their people because of their lifestyle, in which they only do not eat sugar but stalk of sugar. After reading that article, I write down the Japanese agricultual status and apply it to the trial. I am waiting for reply.
(First Writing)
Japanese food self-sufficient rate, which is 39 percentages in 2010, is the lowest with the latest 10 years. Of course, Japanese government has enacted some regulations which improve Japanese agricultural strength such as decreasing tax of agricultural goods. However, those trials don’t seem to work well. I agree with the Japanese government plan which decreases high dependence on imported food from some countries such as China and United States. If the mutual relationships between Japan and the countries which export ingredients become worse, we have to pay attention to our tomorrow’s meals.