TOEFL Writing

2013年06月11日 01:07

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This Week, two Koreas, north Korea and south Korea, will hold senior-level talks in Soel. I think this talk will ease tensions between north Korea and other countries because north Korea seems to compromise their demands. North Korea’s economy may become worse and need some aids from other countries. We have to appreciate this dialogue since the danger of the war might be avoided. Japanese people have passed uneasy days as hearing north Korea’s provocation, “North Korea will attack Japan without mercy”.

 

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